Showing posts with label New Adult. Show all posts
Showing posts with label New Adult. Show all posts

Sunday, September 1, 2013

To Write in Sex or Not?


Should writers put sex in novels? 
Interesting question right? 
All who know me well know that I pretty much will answer yes almost 100% of the time. Obviously, these are adult novels we're talking about. 
Although, I won't lie. . .I wanted Edward to bang out Bella from behind, in the earlier novels.

Hey, don't judge me!!

Anyway a more sane person, Adrianne James is here to discuss whether writers should add sex in a novel or not. First check out her new novel below.

Synopsis: The Mythology department at prestigious Harvard University is tiny—and Mackenzie Duncan has just been selected as one of the lucky few. Her love for myths and legends is strong, but she never thought any of it could be real. 

After being attacked by a large wolf while walking home alone, Mackenzie realizes something is not right. She heals quickly, is suddenly super strong, and is experiencing mood swings that can't possibly be normal. The myths she's studying aren't myths at all. Werewolves are real and she's one of them. Fear of what she is, and who she might hurt sends Mackenzie running from the life she’s worked hard to build–and straight into the arms of a handsome Were named Geoff and into the home of his pack. Living with her new pack takes the edge off her confusion and self-loathing, but the arrival of new pack members changes the dynamic, and tests Geoff and Mackenzie’s growing relationship.

The hardest part of being a werewolf is having no control and no memory of her time as a blood thirsty beast. When a moon cycle passes and she actually remembers bits and pieces of the night, she starts to ask questions, and the more questions she asks, the more she realizes she doesn't like the answers. Can she set aside her own sense of morals to belong to a pack that is like a family or will she leave everything behind yet again in search of a life she can be proud of?




To fade to black or not to fade to black?

That is the question. 
So what is the answer? 
Well, that depends on the story.
To be able to answer that for yourself, you should ask yourself a few questions. 

First, who is the intended audience? 
Are you writing for young teens, mature teens, or adults? 

Next, would the graphic scene add to your story or simply be put in for the sake of having a sex scene? 

If you put it in, how graphic would your character really be? Also, how comfortable are you, the writer, with written graphic scenes? Do you enjoy reading them? What about writing them? Do they make you uncomfortable or embarrassed? If so, don’t feel pressured to add them in.

Writing a love scene should be as natural as actually making love. When your readers come across the scene in your book, you want them to read it and fall into the scene with your characters. 

You want all the emotion that your characters are feeling to spill right out of the page and into your reader. If that isn’t something you are comfortable with, maybe a fade to black is right for you. Maybe you WANT to be able to write the sex scene as if you were the one in the bed (or car, or against a tree, or on a baseball field…), then you should write it over and over until you DO feel it right to the core of your being.

But what if you are comfortable and have already achieved that level of writing? Should you write out EVERY sex scene in your romance novel? 

At what point does it become erotica? 

My opinion is that if the sex scene will add to the story, write it. If it’s a married couple who goes to bed every night together and makes love, do we really need to read it every time?

If you are writing erotica, then by all means, write it out! But please, please, please keep it interesting! No one wants to read the same instruction manual written out over and over again. 

Change the positions or the order of the foreplay, something to keep us on our toes.


No matter what you decide, it is your story. 

Do what you feel is best for your story and don’t let anyone change something you love.




Growing up, Adrianne couldn't get her hands on enough books to satisfy her need for the make believe. If she finished a novel and didn't have a new one ready and waiting for her, she began to create her own tales of magic and wonder. Now, as an adult, books still make up majority of her free time, and now her tales get written down to be shared with the world.

During the day, Adrianne uses her camera to capture life's stories for clients of all ages and at night, after her two children are tucked in bed; she devotes herself to her written work. Adrianne is living the life she always wanted, surrounded by art and beauty, the written word and a loving family.

As a young adult and new adult author, Adrianne James has plans to bring stories of growing characters, a little romance, and perhaps a little magic and mythology down the line for her readers to enjoy.

Monday, August 26, 2013

Book Review: Escaping Reality





"You have no idea just how demanding I can be." And with that erotic promise, his tongue slices into my mouth, a silky, hot caress that seems to touch every inch of my now tingling body.






"We aren't strangers anymore, and I find the idea of occupying your time increasingly appealing." His eyes light. "So use me, baby."

The air crackles between us and there is no denying the growing attraction I have for this man.





I enjoyed this book very much.

Why did I give it three stars?

Well the ROMANCE for me gets:



The Mystery/Suspense part of her life and why she was running from it gets:


It was so badly done that it pissed me off. I don't feel I got any damn answers in the first book. 
And then the ending to me was kind of like a 

What the Fuck?


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That being said, the passion and romance in the book was enough to keep me going and I won't lie. . .I'm DEFINITELY going to read book 2, just to see how the Hero is going to explain himself.

Tuesday, August 20, 2013

My Book Trash May Be Your Book Treasure?


The more a person reads, reads, and reads, the more the person hits a couple duds on the road.

Some months you might hit nothing but duds. I mean you're reading the book and you're like. . .


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But then I go to the book's Goodreads page and people are like:


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"I LOVE THiS BOOK!!


So what does that mean?

Clearly that other people are wrong, and I am freaking right! But even more important, it means that what I may think is utter garbage may very well be someone else's most prized possession.

So here's my trash for this month and perhaps you find some books that you may want to read out of the pile.


WHY TRASH: This just didn't catch me. The premise was great and fun. The main character basically does mediation for mystical creatures. Many of them are dragons. The writing was good. I just didn't care. I was in the mood for something dark and at the time this was really light and humorous.




Why Trash: This book was just hard for me to read. I get into lots of books so it's not that I'm illiterate or anything. . .I just struggled with getting into the story. The world was amazing. . .the stuff I could understand, but. . .I just had to dnf it.




Why Trash: I just dragged through this book. If I hadn't been made to read it by authors Alicia, Megan, and Dara for the Fantasy Floozies book of the month discussion, I would have DNF'd much much earlier.




Why Trash: This book just makes me too damn sad. It's Megan Hart so of course it is beautifully written. She just has that way of writing that makes you think so deeply about things, but it was just too sad.

The heroine just depressed the shit out of me, and FOR ME. . .that is HUGE! I love dark erotic romance. . .but this was just more Sad Erotic Romance. She just was depressed, feeling old, and like she'd wasted her life in a marriage that was too me, not bad at all.




Why Trash: I just wasn't able to get into the story. It just started off like any New Adult or Young Adult novel to the point where it felt really predictable and even boring.  



Well that's my list. What are some books you think are trash, but may be treasures for me or anyone else?


Wednesday, August 14, 2013

New Adult Book Cover Trends




From time to time I like to look at book covers and wonder what image seems to grab book buyers attention. So here's my personal analysis of New Adult book cover trends for August!

These are all books from the New Adult Romance Bestsellers' List.



TATTS
You just going to walk around like that? Yummy!
I would love to see if he's wearing any undies.



This stock model is seen a lot, but I'm not complaining.

What's he so sad about?



It seems one Hot guy is enough to sell a book, and preferably a guy with no shirt on.
 (I know I tend to hit the buy button for a sexy one. DON'T JUDGE ME!)


Dramatically taking off his shirt Hot guy!
Dramatically looking off into the
 distance with no shirt hot guy who
says in an endearing tone, "Why
oh why can I not find any love?"

Looking at me and
creeping me the hell out hot guy.
Looking at me and SO NOT creeping
me out. . .I'm down for whatever is
OFF the Record too, Baby!





 There seems to be some authors and publishers that are starting to branch out with the book covers for New Adult. I'm wondering if it's due to readers not buying the same ole ones anymore or pubs just tired of the same ole thing.
As I did my search for this
blog post, I saw this cover and grabbed it!


This is one of my all time favorites, so glad
to see it back on the bestseller's list!

I heard this series deals with
a girl in an abusive home. I don't
know if I'm reading for this one.

This goes to show that sometimes
it isn't all about the book cover. Sometimes
Readers by the book because it
rocks. And this must rock because the cover
sucks Elephant Balls.

I think this one is captivating.

I actually read this book and
gave it 3 strong stars.

Additionally, I feel like if your name happens to be H.M.Ward. . .then it really doesn't matter what your cover looks like. Check out all of her books that made the New Adult Bestseller's list in August.


I admit that I did enjoy the
series. I stopped at 4 and have been
meaning to catch back up with it.


     







That's it ladies and gents! We are done with New Adult Bestsellers' list book covers for August.

What was your favorite cover this month?
Which one sucked ass?



Tuesday, August 13, 2013

College Week: Top 10 College Experiences Everyone Should Have.


I'm forever dedicating the second week of August as College Romance Week!

Let's hope that all of the brain cells I damaged in my college years from. . .extracurricular activities. . .will allow me to remember this for next year.


Regardless, this week is College Romance Week, where Fantasy Floozies will be giving away things related to that subject each day! 


Since Sarah Daltry was nice enough to stop by and discuss the Top 10 college experiences everyone should have, we'll be giving away TWO ebook copies of her Bestselling Novel.

Check it out!


Available on Amazon
BOOK SUMMARY

This book is for older audiences. 

Lily had a crush on her brother's best friend, Derek for years - which led to their steamy night ten months ago in her bedroom. Now, Lily is going off to college and she and Derek are still going strong. However, when school starts, she realizes it's hard to maintain a relationship while also trying to live her own life. She and Derek find themselves falling apart and Lily has no idea where to turn.

Enter Jack. Everything about him is wrong for Lily and she knows it, but she can't stop herself from being attracted to him. When things implode with Derek, it's Jack who is there to pick up the pieces - and show Lily an entirely new set of experiences she didn't know she was missing.

Of course, Jack has his own problems and once Lily gets to know him better, she starts to wonder if she can handle all of Jack. When Derek reappears on the scene, Lily is forced to decide between two guys and herself. Can she find herself without losing the people who matter in the process?


See where it began in the short story, "Her Brother's Best Friend."





Top 10 College Experiences Everyone Should Have
Disclaimer: Please don't not blame Sarah for the sick images below. . .blame Alicia for teaching me how to find sick images and put them in a post!

1. Living in a dorm. Because really, college is about 90% dorm life and 10% school. ;)


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2. Spring break. Even if it's just a local beach, there is something wonderful about welcoming the warmer weather with your crazy friends!
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3. Staying up all night to finish your papers - and getting a B or higher! 

4. Frat party. At least once.
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Beer Pong


5. Realizing you have total freedom to do whatever you want - and using it to order pizza at 3 am!




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6. Finally being old enough to go clubbing. 


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7. Being absolutely broke and still knowing how to have a great time!


8. Making new friends who aren't the same people you knew growing up. (Friends who tend to last longer, too!)
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9. Finals. Not a good experience, but once you've been through it, you know how to survive the next set!


10. Graduation!!! :D


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Monday, August 12, 2013

Do Goodreads Reviews Matter to the Bestsellers' list? Nope.

 "Kenya pulls you into the story . . . no matter how f'ed up you might think the situation is she makes you believe that there is potential for anything and everything to work and fall apart all at once." 
Megan Martin on Complicated by You

On AMAZON  and  B&N


When my book "Complicated by You" hit the Interracial Romance Bestseller's list this week at #15, I was blown the f*** away.

I was shocked for TWO HUGE REASONS:

1.On Goodreads the review score was so freaking low and there were a lot of negative reviews.




My second reason is that this was not a book I thought that many would be able to swallow, especially my dedicated fans. When many of them didn't like it, I definitely understood and was glad they at least gave it a chance.

Then "Complicated by You" hit three freaking bestseller's list!


Yet, the negative reviews on Goodreads continued to come, and again. . .I know exactly why some can't deal with the book. It's not grammar, plot-line  bad character development, or any of the technical writing things that turn people off of a book.

It's the freaking situation my main character is put in, the decision she has to make for herself to be happy, and perhaps. . .just maybe. . .a few people want to slam my hero in his balls. 

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A few love him. . .they just want to cut his penis off!

I get it.

I want to hurt him too. I tried so so hard to get his ass to do what I wanted him to do. Would he? No. Would any of those damn characters listen to me as I yelled at my computer? No. They just did what the hell they wanted and then forced me to write it all down.

Sorry.
I'm ranting!

So people are buying the book. On Amazon, I have five reviews that rock. Three four stars and two five stars. 

On goodreads? 
3- 5 Stars
4- 4 stars
2- 3 stars
2- 2 stars

There are shelves for this book that say:
disturbing
so-disappointing
didn't-like-it


Meanwhile, Complicated by You continues to rise on the Interracial Romance Bestsellers' list and sell really well.

My mail inbox is full of readers begging for the second book, demanding still that somehow Jay (the hero) gets his balls cut off, and for some strange reason they want a POV done for two secondary characters Pipe and Cynthia (in which I'm actually considering doing just for the fun of it).

Anyway, why am I saying this all in a blog post?

For one, I don't truly believe that Goodreads Reviews matter much to a book's success. 

I see authors all the time going crazy when they get some negative reviews on that site or even others. 
They say they're "defending" their book. 
I say shut the fuck up and write another book.
Keep moving forward.
It's bad business.
Bad for your writing career.
and Moronic at best.

Even statistics agree with me. In the recent study:

The Readers Sound Off! How They Read, What They Like and Where They Find Us    By: Marie Force


When asked which reviews are most important to them, 50 percent chose the reviews posted to retail sites. Goodreads was a distant second at 16 percent, followed by blog reviews at 13 percent and publication reviews (RT Book Reviews, Publisher’s Weekly, Kirkus, etc.) at 10 percent. An additional 10 percent of the respondents listed “Other” sources than those provided by the survey.

So why are authors yelling at book reviews?
I think it's two reasons:
One- the person is insane.
Two- the person just doesn't know any better.

When you see this happening, just send them over to this post. It will make them either feel better. . .or yell at me instead, which is fine. I get yelled at all the time. 


Meanwhile, if you haven't read my Goodreads Review for my own book (which many say is kind of in bad taste for authors to do, but I don't listen). Either way, check it out! 


MY REVIEW FOR Complicated by You!



Complicated by You is dark at times and odd toward the end. It was so so so much fun to write it.








“Sometimes love makes you do dumb shit. Stuff that you always told yourself you would never do, that you’d never let happen. Then you fall in love and all those limits shatter away like glass. You get cut, but you don’t feel it. All you sense is love. Only that connection keeps you breathing another day.” 






            He spun around and stopped my talking with a kiss. . .




            . . .and not just any kiss, but one that ignited flame to wick and set a blaze through me. I burned into a crispy husk of ash and need. I melted right there at the end of the stairs, wet, soaking so bad. . .






“Let me go.”
“No,” he whispered.







“I back down when I know I’m wrong. I back down when I know I can’t win. With you I won’t back down, I’ll keep coming harder and stronger. I won’t sleep or eat. I won’t rest. . ."